修改病句.英语的

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修改病句.英语的
A fairer distribution of the labour actually required and a creative approach to the use of free time provides a much more compelling vision of the future.

A fairer distribution of the labour 【is】 actually required and a creative approach to the use of free time provides a much more compelling vision of the future.前面的句子缺少助动词is,因为是被动语态.其余的应该没错.这是高级交际英语第四册上的原句。我个人觉的错误在 provide。不应该用三单行式。required可以理解为后置定语。主语就是a fairer distribution 和a creative approach故provide该用原型。我觉得不是,如果and做连词的话,我觉得后面那句是a creative approach 做主语,与前面的 a fairer distribution无关。