请问这道英语句子语法有错吗?求英语高手英语专家来.More you did ,more mistakes you'll get ,and closer to the success you'd are 请问这道英语句子语法有错吗?you'll 和you'd可以在一个句子里同时一起用么?

应该是这样翻译的：More you did , more mistakes you will get , and closer to the success you are。 最后一句按照句子的原本的顺序应该是这样的：you are closer to the success.所以我认为那个you'd是多余的。

句子有几个语法错误,应该是The more you do,the more mistakes you'll make,and the closer success you'd be.句子相等于The more you do,the more mistakes you will make,and the closer success you would be.针...