I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before.I have been thinking abou...I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before.I have been thinking about the question you ask me.On my opinion,you should come back after finished your studies abroad.For one reason,that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easily for you to find a good job.In fact,I know a few big company in

I'm very glad to receive the letter you sent to me two weeks before.I have been thinking about the question you asked me.In my opinion,you should come back after finishing your studies abroad.For one reason,what you are studying is very needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for you to find a good job.In fact,I know a few big companies in our city are longing to hire people like you.For another reason,I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old.But this is only my point.It is up to you to make a right choice.

I'm very gald to receive the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I have been thinking about the questions you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after finishing your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowdays in our country. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, i know a few big companies in our city hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, i think it will be more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old. But this is only my point, it is up to you to make a right choice.
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