英语翻译,比较口语化：我有些事情想和你谈谈,事实上,我星期一不能来上课,因为我周一下午有院队的训练课,但我对你的课程非常的感兴趣,我非常喜欢英语而且我也想提高我的口语能力,我可以不要学分,但我希望每周四可以来听你的课,请问可以吗?

i want to talk to you.in fact,l can't take the lessons on Monday,because l'll have a music training,but l'm interested in your class,l like English and want my oral skill,l don't want study marks but your lesson on Thursday.Okay?

I have something must talk with you .Acctually , I can't attend the class on Monday because of the training.But I am so interested in your class ,I love English and I want to improve my tongue.I can give up the score but I hope I can listen your lesson each Thursday, could I ?

Something I want to talk to you, in fact, I can't come to class on Monday, because I have the team on Monday afternoon session, but for you, I am very interested in the course, I like English very much and I want to improve my spoken English ability, can I don't credit, but I hope you can come and listen, every class, could you please?

I need to talk to you (或者 discuss with you) about something. Actually I cannot come to your Monday class because I have a team training session in the afternoon. But I am very interested in taking your class. I really like English and wish to improve my spoken English.
I don't have to get the credit for the class.
I hope to attend your class next Thursday, is it OK with you?

I have something to talk with you.In fact,I won't be able to come on Monday for I should be present at training sessions in my institute's team,but,I'm very interested in your courses.I'm fond of English and want to improve my spoken skill very much.I don't care about credits but hope to audit your class on Thursday,Is that OK?