They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic with her children.换种说法?They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic with her children.能不能这样说：They had rushed up to her while she and her children was having a picnic.
问题描述：
They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic with her children.换种说法?
They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic with her children.
能不能这样说：
They had rushed up to her while she and her children was having a picnic.
答
首先你的要用“she and her children”的话，就不能用was,应该是were.而且如果那样改的话感觉有点怪怪的不符合习惯用法，当然别人也能看懂你的意思。只是建议，敬供参考！
答
可以,但里面有语法错误,正确的应该是这样：
They had rushed up to her while her children and she were having a picnic.
其他更好的变形有：
While she and her children were having a picnic,they had rushed up to her.
这样句意比较明确